Wow… I absolutely love this piece. I can relate in so many ways. Your words came to life and held onto my heart til I was thru reading the very last line. I love it.

Thank you, Tanae. It’s lovely of you to visit and to take the time to comment…. and to say such nice things, too!

I’m going to HAVE to start writing again so I can post happy poems… I wish it could have been something much more cheerful for you to relate to

Ah, Beth, I’m sorry to hear you know precisely where I was writing from.
The echoes and unanswered questions never really fade, do they?

This spoke to me….the first part expressed how I felt about the time I would have had my child that miscarried. Knowing I will never know those things…..

Questions unanswered….pain never ending……

Many thanks again for your time and attention

I’ve been browsing around your site “A Life Of Recluse”. I must say, I like the concept (and that photo!). I’m struggling a little with the navigation, however. Since I can’t find a place to leave a comment for you there, I’m afraid this will have to suffice for the time being. I wish you well with your project there – it certainly looks interesting and anything that speaks of being a recluse appeals to me, a hermit-in-progress

You made me tut tut tut…with such saddness and much truth! Bravo Molli… najmax

Ah, that might explain why I was getting a little lost – I clicked every link but missed out on any streaming media. I’m on a dial-up connection here and it takes forever for anything like that to kick in and, even when it does, it has a tendency to start and stop so often that it becomes painful to listen to/watch.

I was actually hoping to read more of your writing but couldn’t find a link. Your username here is linked to “Life Of A Recluse”, not a wordpress blog.
Please feel free to add a link to your site here – I’d like to read your poetry

Thanks for taking a look at my site…alot of people get confused with the navigation…but I say always remember that it is a hypertext. Its is written so that the reader feels disoreantated, and a little confused, ( The text is HYPER) so keep clicking more links to find out more! Just go with flow, click whatever you want, and It will eventually make sence…PS always click on the title chapter heading (when it appears as a link) because this will play videos music and show photos in the tv…Thanks again I really appreciate you taking the time to go visit my site, and hope that you will visit my wordpress blog for my poetry. Love Najma x

Yes you will get lost…but do not be afraid to get lost in my world, I dont hate anyone and wont hurt anyone, even if my writing comes across venomous sometimes…Its a shame about your dail up, you will find it fustrating in that case…although some links have just got still images which wont be too bad, but its just a case of risking it, which may turn out to be just a nuicance.
But anyway I am pleased that you have shown interest, and hope you will enjoy it,my poetry is on
http://www.phosphorescence1001.wordpress.com

Thanks again, often I find on wordpress the most talented people who consume the praise silently, it’s always nice when talented people are gracious and humble enough to respond…much love and respect Najma x

Thanks Kim. I could really only guess at the latter – teaching a child to be independent and letting them go to be so. I’m glad to hear from someone who is experiencing this themselves and that I may have, even a little, captured those thoughts and feelings.

This is so good and yes, on so many levels… I first thought of the loss of a child,which i have experienced…But then i thought of live birth, that result in a child, the process of preparing a child to be an independent adult…Both are totally different ways of letting go, allowing a child to “leave” and be free… I lost a child pre-birth and that was hard, now im losing one to independent adulthood (college) and that is hard as well. Thank you for capturing both!!